Thursday, November 25, 2021

Midway Beach

 Today we were learning to write adding personification to our writing. I wrote about when I went to Midway Beach with my dogs. 

I found it easy to find a good background and a good font for my slide. I also found it easy to write about Midway beach. 

I found it hard to add personification because I'm not really that good at it. In the end I think I did pretty well with personification. 

Next time I will add more words to paragraph 3 and 4.  


Excitement Gone Wrong ( Imaginative Writing )

Today we were learning to make a imaginative piece of writing by adding describing words and  personification.

I found it easy to think about what I was going to write because I have a really good imangenation. I also found it easy to put it on my slide and choose the background color, font and the color of the font. 

I found it hard to add personification to my writing and plan how my writing was going to work in the different paragraphs. 

Next time I will add personification and make it have a plot twist at the end. 

Thursday, November 4, 2021

The Awapuni School Fun Run!

Today we were writing about the Awapuni Fun Run. We had to do one moment in time about the Fun Run. 
I found it hard to name what my paragraphs are going to be called, but in the end I came up of what I was calling them. 
I found it easy to describe about the fun run because so many great things happened and that I could describe it really well. I also found it easy to choose a background because the fun run was colorful, so I went for a colorful background. 
Next time I will add more personification and make the words bigger to see them.