We were learning about how people will no more about me
I found it easy to tell people about myself and use rich sentices
I found it challenging to us a voice type
Next time I will try add more about me into the writing
Hi my name is Tiana and I am 9 years old and I go to Awapuni School.My mums name is Anita and my dad's name is Ash.I was born in Auckland in Pukekohe and I was living there for 4 years.Now I moved to Gisborne.
My goal for this year is trying to get the shield and to get better at my maths.I really enjoy hanging out with friends and doing writing.I am good at surfing with the big waves (witch i love).
I'm looking forward to be one of the team of sorcerer and I am looking forward to see my Nana.
Kia ora Tiana,
ReplyDeleteI am working in classes like Mrs Williams.
Great to see you have shared something about yourself and that you know to be cybersmart by only sharing your first name.
What do you have to do to get the shield?
Mrs Krausse
hi there this is Tiana
DeleteSo how you get the shield is to be amazing and be the awapuni kind and do the right thing at the right time for the right rezone so yha that is how you get the shield.
Kia Ora Tiana,
ReplyDeleteI like how you explained what you like and what you need to work on. Maybe you could work on your spelling more because half of your writing wasn't spelt right. I liked the way you said you should have added more rich sentenses even though you didnt really say that and said you should add more writing about you. did you think about when you were doing your stems to do full sentences because your writing was a bit short when I was reading your writing. When I read your stems on your this post I learnt more about you because I dont know you that well and it taught me some stuff about you but add more information about you so I can learn more about you. from Sophie