Ten reasons that make a good recount and my goals for term 4

We were reminding each other about what can make a good recount,I was working with Danil who was my buddy.We had to right down ten things that will make a good recount.I was happy to have a lot of information it my head before I started so I can right that straight on the doc.

Ten reasons that make a good recount

1.Have rich power words by taking out the boring words.

2.Have it shorter not longer but have power words.

3.Have paragraphs,1,2,3 planing.  

4.Have parts like what did it look like,what did it sound like,what did it feel like and what did it taste like.

5.Have good describing words.

6.Have capital letters at the start of a sentence.

7.Have full stops at the end of a sentence.

8.Something that has happened recently.

9.Have five ideas in a paragraph.

10.Have what,when,who and where.

I need to improve my writing skills with power words not boring words.My goal this term is to not be shy in everything but have a loud voice.