We were learning about how we can do a rich piece of writing.We had to take out the boring words and put in the rich words.
I found it easy to learn what the difference are between re-craft and edit.
I found it challenging to have power words not boring words.
Next time I will not add so much "and's"
(The red words mean that I have edit those words)
Kia ora Tiana,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have done your capital letter and full stops. You add good describing words and you said what the red is for but maybe next time you could do a space before you type your next sentence.
Koa ora Calais,this is Tiana,the owner who made this post.
DeleteThank you Calais for saying all of these nice things about my blog post,I Am very happy that you like my post:)
Next time i will do a space before i do my next sience.
From Tiana:)