Today we were learning about to post I pice off writing from this term. I chose to post me kayaking in the rain at camp kaitawa.
I found it easy to copy and paste my writing to my google slide and find a piece off writing that will be good to post on my blog.
I found it hard to make my background calm and find my spelling mistakes in my writing because I had to much writing.
Next time I will make my writing a bit shorter and make my writing more describing with more rich words
Dear Tiana,
ReplyDeleteI loved all the emotion that you poured into this writing, I too almost tipped Mr Barclay out of his Kayak. I understand how it would be difficult to find spelling mistakes in that much writing, I did see a few grammar ones though. In the future maybe you could try to put two sentences into your Stems.
Yours truly Isobel.
Hi Isobel
DeleteI will try and work on my stems next time by adding more words and a few more sentence.
Thank You for the advice,Tiana.H
Your welcome!
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